You wake up only to discover you are in an unknown place. You feel the presence of evil, and see shimmering apparitions in dark hallways. The only way to escape this nightmare is to put the pieces of the story together; uncover the dark secrets that lie within the past, and present.
Looking very good...
...the oGL lightning does not cease to impress me. You just put a thing, give it arguments, and voilla!. You don't have to create endless sectors with varying amounts of light.
Yeah, what he said.
But it looks a tad plain too. Add more detail and stuff to spice up appearance. And maybe some uneven construction. Shots #1 and #2 looks like it's half a screenshot mirrored, but shot #3 is better.